MY BIRTH 🐣



I came from my mother ,
searching for my father ,
knowing I'm having a brother...
crying and laughing
then again laughing and crying, 
I felt like, in a new world...

I went out roaming like an angel , 
passing from hand to hand ...
People told my mother that,
I was such a sweet creature!
that I would even change their future!

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Story behind the recovery of this poem😁

This is supposed to be my first ever poem. ( umm...I don't know if this can be called a poem, but still you can't expect a 11 year old to write like Wordsworth or some legends like that! 😛)

As you must have noticed the 'date of publishing' is given as 1st of May 2016. Well, actually that's the date when I wrote this poem ( Approximately.. 'cause I remember writing this amidst my summer holidays..) And you might be probably thinking that  how did I find something that was written years back! (Don't expect that I saved a copy🤪) 

And the story behind the recovery goes like this:
One day, my Nyooty ( I'm the sole person on this earth who calls her by this name😁You guys can call her  'Niya Sheril') texted me and asked why haven't I published the poem 'MY BIRTH'..??  I didn't reply because I just had a raw copy that wasn't even edited. After a few days she sent me a pic which had a caption: " Do you remember this handwriting?" Gosh!!! You won't believe! It was a handwritten copy of MY BIRTH! Even I didn't save a copy and she had a handwritten copy! Great, huh? And yeah that copy was written when I was in grade 6😎... But anyway, if you read MY BIRTH, Nyooty is the one behind. 🖤







 

Comments

  1. I do remember this poem.. wasn't this published in our school magazine, once? ?
    Enthayalum polichittund Aliyaa🤩..
    Pinne, 'nyootti' yod chilav tharan parayan marakkanda😁.. pullikari ippo famous ayillee.. 😉
    (To be honest, she is the one who sends me all your works.. 😇)

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  2. Its amazing considering the fact that it came from the creativity of a 11 yrs old.,

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  3. You have got a creative head dear.... KUDOS!!! ♥️👍🤩

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  4. It's really amazing to read a poem so sweet with great significance!!! I'm looking forward to more of your poems... 😍😁

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  5. Nyooty here😂
    Ah, I still love this poem to this day and so I have kept it with me since then🤩
    Waiting for more crisp poems!👏👌

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  6. 💞Superb dear💞.Well, the irony is ur birth and ur friend's death got published in our school magazine😂

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  7. It became my 2nd favorite

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